Collaboration

THE ELSEWHERE VARIATIONS is 48 new poems by Peter Bakowski and Ken Bolton written in a call-and-response manner via email between Peter in Melbourne and Ken in Adelaide, both poets of long standing and long sitting. Available in personable bookshops it is also available via Wakefield Press or via initially contacting Peter. His email is pbakowski54@gmail.com

My sixth poetry collection in Australia will be published by Guillotine Press in late July 2017 www.guillotinepress.com.au

Cordite review of PERSONAL WEATHER

Campbell Thomson
Review Short: Peter Bakowski’s Personal Weather

7 May 2014

Personal Weather by Peter Bakowski
Hunter Publishing, 2014

Bakowski looks into the lens in the photograph by Nick Walton-Healey on the cover of Personal Weather. The poems are also direct. They eschew simile, ambiguity, and the abstract. Were he an etcher, Bakowski’s work would be figurative with clear outlines and orderly perspective. There is no hesitation in his lines. His skies might be cloudy but there would be no obscuring storms of angst, only fugitive rays spotlighting the quirky in the mundane.

The preface to his 1995 prize winning book, In the Human Night, states that he was ‘Born with a hole in the heart to Polish-German parents in Melbourne on 15 October 1954 … On 21 January 1993 he survived an eight hour heart operation.‘
In this volume birds fluttered through the verses with unabashed lyrical abandon. Natural imagery abounded:

In the mean time there are
more poems to write,
I like to try to put
a small truth in each one.
Say, about the size 
of a mouse or a matchbox.

(‘Self-portrait in East Melbourne flat, 22 June 1994’)

This is Bakowski’s credo. The poems presented as found objects the poet picks up on his daily walk:

The streets, of course
are full of poems
rushing off to work
fretting at each kerb,
waiting for the hiccup
of each cursed traffic-light
…
Undress them carefully
as you would, a peacock
as you would, a panther

(‘The Dictionary is just a beautiful menu, for Frank O'Hara’)

In Bakowski’s last collection, Beneath our Armour (Hunter 2009) he says ‘My aim as a poet is to write clear and accessible poems, to use ordinary words to say extraordinary things. No matter how many books I write in my life time they will all be about what it’s like to be a human being.’
The poems displayed international ambition. There were vignettes of writers such as ‘Portrait of Cyril Connolly’ and in another he had Sylvia Plath writing about Ted’s new lover.
Not all these life studies entranced but they reflect a working method:

learning the difference 
between the necessary and the overworked line.

(‘Caspar Morton, portrait artist, talking about his life and work’)

Personal Weather, Bakowski’s seventh book, continues this minimalist, sharp eyed project. In ‘Self-portrait in the shadow of scalpels, Melbourne, 26 March 2013’, Bakowski is glad he ‘wasn’t born a century before/the common use of antiseptics,/blood transfusions,/general anaesthetization,/morphine and oxygen.’
There are five portraits of other writers, including Plath. Maybe there should be a century embargo on Plath poems. There is ‘A Melbourne letter poem to Ken Bolton’ and ‘A letter from Rebecca Cartello in Scarborough, England, to her sister Carla in Longreach, Queensland, 15 December 1955’. There are four poems about letters, including:

‘The letter Y’

invented the martini. (p 20)

There is a sextet of epigrams, including:

'The pickpocket'
 
Wishing to reform
he joins
a nudist colony. (p 45)

There is a foreword by Barry Humphries, set out like blank verse. It could be taking the mickey. It reads, in part:

Most modern poetry like nearly all modern
architecture
is awful
but these poems are good.
Very good. (p 1)

A Spanish proverb prefaces the poems: ‘Tomorrow is often the busiest day of the week.’ A man with a serious heart condition may have a special relationship with tomorrow.
The poems in Personal Weather look similar: left justified, un-rhyming views through a 50mm normal lens with straightforward syntax. They have no interest in their own concreteness. They aim to mean. They aim beyond the delectation of other poets.
The book’s first poem is ‘City workers during morning rush hour, Collins Street’, alludes to John Brack’s painting of 5pm in the same street. The second stanza is:

What a gift is hunger. Because of it your ancestors left their caves,
Explored plains, valleys, rivers, seas. These
Adventures became paintings, songs, tall tales, family legends, headlines.
There's the story of each person, on the trains, trams and street corners.
How vulnerable you are, how strong you are. I want to reveal your
Essence via the camera of this poem, as you swarm and
Rush in the business district, glancing at your wristwatches. (p 3)

This has the yearning of Whitman without his music. It relies on lists and the close observation of a Cartier-Bresson.
Bakowski blogs poems and musings on poetry and his influences. He pays homage online in ‘One for Charles Bukowski’:

You've taught me
to be lean in the poem,
to say the thing 
directly,
the way the hammer
says things 
to the nail.

Online he discusses pruning and sifting his poetry: ‘I’ve realized in my twenty years of writing poetry I’ve now used the words ‘sparrow’ and ‘sofa’ enough.’
He talks about being inspired by crime fiction and biography. He describes writing poetry as ‘ambling with your thoughts on a long leash in the park of your skull.’
Do the words he finds in this park excite? His corner of the playground may not entice all players but there is a whittled, sly serenity in his best lines. From the book’s last poem, ‘Some observations and a wish, for Ron Padgett’ come:

During your life the speed at which your remove your clothes may vary.

If pigs could fly, there'd be less bacon.

To ants, a twig is a battering ram.

May your mind resist the impulse to be a closed fist. (p 72)

One hundred years of games in literature do not trouble this work but there should be some quiet in our hubbub for Bakowski to be heard.

PERSONAL WEATHER launch invitation, 6 p.m., Tues 4 March at THE WHEELER CENTRE (click author photo below to view)

You're all invited!

The paper dolls

Yesterday

we had to dance

for a visitor’s amusement.

Today

we are pinned

to a wall.

Our pencilled eyes

can’t blink away the dust.

Pale, thin,

we grip each other’s hands

and tremble

whenever the door

opens.

The above poem is from my new (fifth) poetry collection, Personal Weather, to be launched at The Wheeler Centre, Melbourne, at 6 p.m. on Tuesday, 4 March.

The black room

                                                                                                                                       for Charles Simic

No light switch.

No windows.

A pile of kindling

but no matches.

Room without

books, or pillow,

or a thimbleful of water.

Nothing to do

except lie down

on the cold floorboards

and see how dark

it is inside you.

The above poem is from my 2014 poetry collection, Personal Weather, which will be launched at The Wheeler Centre, 176 Little Lonsdale Street, Melbourne, 6 to 8 p.m. on Tuesday, 4 March 2014.

The letter Y

invented the slingshot.